Corny, but it gets better...
...It sounds like u are trying to copy a song by The Killers called 'Everything Will be Alright', but without the same sort of originality or personality. The instruments sound weak, the drum loop is ok and sounds interesting with the fx on it. Just a little too predictable and uninspiring though.
Never heard of that song actually... so no. if anything it would be Pixies although the only similrarity is the main chords. adn yeah, i guess it's pretty corny and the instruments are weak and so, but then it's made in fruity loops, which mostly fits Hiphop and techno stuff (I feel)... made in less than 40 minutes, which also can explains why it is like it is... however thanks for the review, hopefully i'll learn something from it..
bad
I will hazard a guess that u r using fruity loops and are just starting out. I want to be kind and say that this is a good start at writing music, but its really bad. Surely u must listen to music in some form and be able to realise that this sounds like something a bunch of retarded monkeys with no hands could write. It is just pointless and crap.
...lol well, it was my first one and theres one problem.........I DONT KNOW HOW TO MAKE LONGER SONGS WITH FL! lol...sooooo help?
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It's a nice idea, and it sounds pretty cool, but it needs some serious work to make it sound interesting to listen to. I like the beat that u make towrds the end of the loop, and u should develop that with some synths maybe. I sounds pretty god damn annoying though.
Annoying? WTF its guns! guns are awesome!
Tis ok...
...i like the instrumentation, but the drums r kinda boooring and even though the trk is short i get disinterested very quickly. That stabbing note is pretty irritating, it gets so nice when it's not there! Could do with developing. It has some nice parts, but it's not enough for me to download it.
well ya, its the first thing i ever made that wasnt a loop in fl studio, it took me so long to understand fl studio, lol so its alright for a first anything before here was made with acid unless it was a short loop
Nothing too gr8.
I dont like the sounds of the instruments you have used, they sound too much like presets with a bit of reverb. Nothing much happens throughout the song, it's pretty dull, it's nice, but that's all. The stringy parts sound good and the bass is pretty smooth, but the beats are very average.
It breaks no new ground.
I know, just experimenting. It's a basic hiphop beat, with alot of subtle variations. The intstruments weren't presets, I actually worked pretty hard on em. Well, can't win em all ;)
Greetz,
DJ Runaway
It Reminds me of...
..Prefuse73. i like this a lot. It's a mish-mash of styles and beats, but i like that. I'm not sure how much of this trk is actually yours, but nonetheless it sounds cool.
It sounds like it could be an intro to an album. I love the weird musicbox sounds. It's really inventive and original, I just wish that I knew that this is all u.I hope this is an original trk made by u, if it isnt, then i give full marks for taste, cos it is a nice piece of bip-hop, if u didnt make it then kudos for putting this tune onto Newgrounds. Either way, I like it, it's a gr8 piece of instrumental hip-hop.
82% of the song is mine, the beats is made by somebody else, but sliced by me, the guitar/strings are from Spandau Ballet's True, and everything else is mine... thx
Grow up.
I spend the majority of my life in a wheelchair because of a debilitating disease, you need to grow up and think first before making tracks like this. how the fuck would u like it.
its not to be taken seriously...
Not Your Tune....
Fuck off. You didn't make this.
Firstly, you are beyond abusive. Secondly, this is a REMIX. I didnt realise that meant i created it. Thirdly, your opinion would be irrelevant if it wasnt the first review that gives the impressions.
So, just in case anyone else wants to give me abuse for this, the sources are Bloodhound Gang and Aphex Twin. I'm watching you Amoeboy, and if you ever dare to get off your LazyBoy recliner and make something, i'll give you the same respect you showed me.
This is all over the place!
Sounds like a load of samples thrown together that dont fit that well. There are some good moments isn the track, but overall it's disjointed and irritating.
More or less.... This was made a loooong time ago. I was really crappy back then, but now I'm better. Something like FX... My songs aren't originally intended for something like NG, so I have to cut back on the quality of the songs by ALOT. 4-15 minutes = Horrible Quality... I'm working on a song now... And I promise it'll be great.
Booooooooooooooring.
What a waste of time, can't believe this got into the top 5, it sux.
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