good
not DnB, but nice and bass heavy. Intro could do with some synth sounds over the top. I like the vocal snippets. The trk doesnt do much and is kinda boring, needs a lot more to keep my attention. It's great when the full beat kicks in, but i think it needs a different bassline. NOt bad.
Well written
It's stereotypical Trance music. Very well written , very competent, but just uninventive.
I'm impressed by the fact u are only 14 yet u can create full-on tracks of this nature. Very good, and i would like to hear what u go on to produce in the years to come.
i really really hope u didnt vote higher cuz of my age. i wish ppl didnt include that in the review of the songs "goodness" or whatever u wanna call it.
as far as the uninventiveness goes, i really like this kind of music so why not make it? lol being origional does not always sound good (if you get what im saying)
thanks for the review and the 9
starts well....
... The single thumping beat later on in the track does help it recover, but it's so unoriginal and lacks any personality. This could have been made by anyone! I think u need to give your tracks some more personality. Reverb and sound effects that have been used before don't help.
Average.
I know what you mean...this isnt one of my better tracks..and there is no real good build up. i personaly think that many of my other songs far exeed this one. The reason I submited this was just to try somthing new and apperently it is a somthing that does not settle to well. another reason I submited this was because i used some backround FX and various diferent sounds just to see what I could creat.
Ill keep this review in mind for my future tracks! (M)
thanx for the feed back
ermmmmm.....
...doesnt sound like someone who's angry to me. Sounds like a piece of univentive, randomly glued together sounds and beats that are so booooooring.
The trk sounds empty, disjointed and totally lacks any ooomph. And the 'begin' vocal at the start, did u think that would sound cool, hahahha!
Fast paced it may be, but c'mon, it's so empty and lacking any soul that anyone could have made it, where's the personalitly?
congratulations! you managed to be a complete DICK while reviewing my FIRST TRACK. every heard of "constructive criticism"? Funny, everyone else seemed to like it, and everyone else has also managed to make music. so, let's hear some of your stuff mr.composer. you're the epitome of a hypocrite, and maybe im overdoing this, cause i know im going to have to get used to cockbreath fucks like you, but why dont you try not being such a prick when you dish out your shallow, narrow-minded opinions next time you talk about someone's music.
thank you for reviewing =)
how is that indie?
definately nothing to do with indie, shouldve been put in misc. Its ok and couldve used a solid beat to it instead of those overly repetetive kicks.
thnx, yea i didnt kno wut indie was, so i figured it sounded close, yea aim new to music makin so i guess this is a good start
It's good
The drums do the bassline no justice. They sound too military and put me off listening to the rest of the track. I did listen to it all though, and it was pretty good. I only want to listen once though, because it isn't that intersting or unique enough to keep me coming back for more. I read your comments about it getting voted 0 and it definately doesnt deserve that, so i'll give u 4/5, however i am being generous because of your age. This trk is nowhere near as good as some of the quality Drum and bass tunes i've heard on this site. I hope u don't think i'm being too harsh, I'm just being honest and giving my opinion.
thats your opinion, this is a branch of DNB, my age means nothing, jus cuz im 14 doesnt mean that i cant do just as good as everyone else.
i did the drums like that ON PURPOSE, they are fast, hard, and crazy.
so this is like a snare branch of DNB, sorry you didnt like it, please dont vote higher jus cuz im 14.
Better...
...but the vocals/lyrics sound like a schoolboy singing bout nothing, which might sound good to some people, but not to me. I thinbk the breakdown in the middle is gr8! The best part of the trk. Cmon man, get a new singer! I'll fukin sing for u, i can sing better than that!
err....
...which Tim Burton movie would that be then?
I have to say that the instruments you used in this trk really do the arrangement and production no justice at all.
Choose your instruments carefully.
It's not badly written, it's just fukin annoying.
It gets better towards the end of the tune with the nice marimba sounds, but that aint enough to make this worth anything more than 2/5, and that's me being generous.
well now...
....yet again u managed to make a random piece of non-music. House, go on then, tell me in your illiterate manner how this can possibly be justified as house music. At least put it under the misc category, and pls, pls stop submitting this shit.
Would u review this favourably? Would u listen to this and enjoy it? I think not.
I dont wanna come across as an asshole when reviewing your tunes, I try to be fair with whatever tracks I listen to. This is not music, it's just sounds/noise. Be offensive, tell me i'm wrong idk, this will always be a pile of shit.
pretty shit.....
.....that main riff, on the incredibly weak and annoying sounding synth, sounds like some techno tune riff I cant remember the name of from the early nineties. I am being very generous giving this 3/10 because I am taking your age, be it physically or mentally into consideration.
do u actually listen to your stuff first before submitting?
Age 41, Male
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